I sent it to an agent I know and he very kindly told me he liked it, but that it needed work to appeal to an audience that didn't know me personally. I started implementing those changes, draft 2, and then sidetracked myself to work on Music Man.
In a disturbing note, I can't find my pictures from Afghanistan right now. I'm still looking but they may have died with my work machine. Which would just be stupid.
Edit: Found them. Whew. Backing up now. In multiple places.
Edit: Just made a new friend, a woman who blogs in a wildly entertaining manner and is only slightly annoying to deal with. A bit of a whiner, but we can work past that. Anyway, she's helping me edit the Empire of Dirt into something a little more entertaining. Joy!
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